tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7000658348481995041.post3822222996526495636..comments2023-12-11T22:15:18.595-08:00Comments on CLOSE ENCOUNTERS: HOW TO WRITE CRAP DIALOGUECatherine Foxhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13474915175193477553noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7000658348481995041.post-90346219159078572272012-01-26T00:13:30.468-08:002012-01-26T00:13:30.468-08:00That's a B- then. Must try harder ...That's a B- then. Must try harder ...JOhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03127111575563904349noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7000658348481995041.post-61174818090939823362012-01-25T13:08:13.185-08:002012-01-25T13:08:13.185-08:00Sorry, that's not quite right. You mean 'r...Sorry, that's not quite right. You mean 'reaching for the small black glossy yet strangely dull delete button with a tremulous finger, like a fish quivering on a hook.' See how much better that is?Catherine Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13474915175193477553noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7000658348481995041.post-34895791599394387922012-01-25T10:50:47.889-08:002012-01-25T10:50:47.889-08:00"Bother," she said grumpily, reaching fo..."Bother," she said grumpily, reaching for the delete button. "There goes my piece for the next workshop...!!"JOhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03127111575563904349noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7000658348481995041.post-60504080307162569132012-01-25T10:41:03.603-08:002012-01-25T10:41:03.603-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.JOhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03127111575563904349noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7000658348481995041.post-6015452581114270332012-01-25T05:48:20.378-08:002012-01-25T05:48:20.378-08:00So glad you like it!!! she typed, running her hand...So glad you like it!!! she typed, running her hands through her mad woman hair, strangely in need of a cut, whilst laughing in a self-congratulatory manner, like a blogger who thinks she has just posted an immensely wise post in a clever way, rather intelligently.Catherine Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13474915175193477553noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7000658348481995041.post-2865726114377164942012-01-25T05:42:21.007-08:002012-01-25T05:42:21.007-08:00Oh that is marvellous. Way to make me laugh out lo...Oh that is marvellous. Way to make me laugh out loud at work, man.Mandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06123143406045045554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7000658348481995041.post-49117482430464589772012-01-25T05:25:32.827-08:002012-01-25T05:25:32.827-08:00Shall we 'out' the crap authors here then?...Shall we 'out' the crap authors here then? Name names?<br /><br />('I thought amusingly to myself with a cheeky smirk on my face, whilst also wondering if I'd ever get my work done in an understatedly anguished way!')tallandrewhttp://onliving.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7000658348481995041.post-14124665974719957092012-01-25T05:15:48.875-08:002012-01-25T05:15:48.875-08:00Splendid! That "she laughed", "he s...Splendid! That "she laughed", "he smiled" thing is SO irritating!Helen Ceridwenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02048938885553846948noreply@blogger.com